[离任作者] 【山村避难记（乱伦）】完整版

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1楼大中小发表于 2011-3-12 14:51 显示全部帖子

很有乡土气息，看着让人向往.主人公是贪污而跑去农村.而在农村里却给了主人公大大的性福.应该在描述些主人公回城里的细节,比方说买些丝袜之类的给自己的女人试穿,增加些情趣.还比如说主人公曾经在城里的一些生活.描述出来与农村对比一下.就更完美了.

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